Feeling paragraph

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Again, in writing class, as a warm up, Lee gave us each cards with a feeling on it and we had to write a paragraph about that feeling. I got greedy this time. Here it is:

A huge meal was spread around me. I licked my lips and started on a bowl of pudding. Two hours later I finished. I didn’t feel well, so I went to bed.

Feeling paragraph

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In a writing class, as a warm up, Lee gave us each cards with a feeling on it and we had to write a paragraph about that feeling. I got cheerfull. Here it is:

I was so happy. I had completed the music with no mistakes. I would pass the exam and learn new pieces for the next one. Just two more exams then I can teach piano. “Yes!” I said to myself.

gist two

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this week we have done anouther Gist lesson:

 Key words: people, idea, welcoming, cat, dog, into, home, seems, like, responsibility, they, would, avoid.

Pets, need, activity, and, if, dog, becomes, your, pet, you’ll, be, signing, up, for, daily, walks.

Having, animal, can, have, impact, on, social, life, in, a, good, way.

Having, pet, in, home, is, great, way, for, children, to, learn, life, lessons.

The, presence, of, pet, in, home, can, boost, mood.

 Gist: pets have lots of advantages if you get one like losing weight, children learning life lessons and boosting your mood.

Word Count: 20

GIST

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This week we have been learning about the summarizing stratergy GIST. Here’s a link for the lesson:   http://leesclassroom.global2.vic.edu.au/2017/06/14/gist-lesson/

This a example of a GIST:

1st key words: evidence, shows, humans, catching,since 40000 years, archeogical evidence shows bones, cave paintings.

1st GIST: archeoligists have proved that people have been catching fish for 40000 years by finding discarded fish bones and cave drawings.

Word count: 20

2nd key words: recreational fishing done  different ways.

2nd GIST: humans have been catching fish for 40000 years, probarly by hand. These days we do it with hooks and poles.

Wordcount:  20

3rd key words: most people consider fishing hook and line.

3rd GIST: humans have been catching fish for 40000 years, probarly by hand. These days, people think of it as hook and line.

Word count: 21